Overall, I'd say pretty good! Only recommendations I could make would be to mask larger areas, like the panels behind the doors, so that the edges come out cleaner. Sometimes I'll even take a fine Micron pen around edges like that and touch them up. The engine compartment looks good. I'd also recommend getting some polishing pads for the paint. It's hard to get a good, shiny paint job without them.
I've got an odd question: In any of the parts packs, AMT or Revell, are there the smaller tires? Like the ones for the Capri II or the Corvair kits? It'd be nice to have for cars that had smaller tires to begin with.
I've done the pearl white on the lenses and cleared. It looks okay... I prefer to cast the lenses and make clear ones, then drill out the old ones. I've used those googly eyes you can buy at craft shops to make the buckets and used foil to chrome them, then just glue the new lenses in on top.