past reset uss enterprise ncc-1701

[michelle]

I had to replace the badly warped and bowed 3d resin printed pylons on a older build of my uss enterprise ncc-1701 from the end of my plot treatment I wrote for a 4th Kelvin verse timeline star trek film with a set of pylons 3d printed with pla filament 

I had to film on my computer desk in my hobby room since the model was a bit longer then what I can film on top of the small 4 shelf  bookcase in my living room that I normally film these videos on 

I have included all 6 page plot treatment I wrote that I mentioned above in the pics below

Edited July 6, 2023 by michelle

[ColonelKrypton]

Overall, very nicely done.

 

cheers, Graham

 

[michelle]

3 hours ago, ColonelKrypton said:

Overall, very nicely done.

 

cheers, Graham

 

Thank you  what do you think of my plot treatment I wrote 

[ColonelKrypton]

2 hours ago, michelle said:

what do you think of my plot treatment I wrote 

Creative and engaging. An enjoyable read with some interesting plot twists. 

To be critical for a moment and offer some constructive criticism, some work on punctuation will help with the flow of the story

cheers, Graham

[michelle]

40 minutes ago, ColonelKrypton said:

Creative and engaging. An enjoyable read with some interesting plot twists. 

To be critical for a moment and offer some constructive criticism, some work on punctuation will help with the flow of the story

cheers, Graham

thank you  

[Dave Van]

Your work is always getting better.....

[michelle]

1 hour ago, Dave Van said:

Your work is always getting better.....

Thank you