Nothin to apologize for - Looks alright to me!!
What issues did you have with the transfers? I used them on a few of my NASCAR builds, and they worked great.
Mark,
try taking a fine or extra fine sanding stick to the trim before you foil it. That should take any of the lumps and bumps off, and leave a smooth surface for the foil.
Mr. Gustavson is fairly well known from the HHMB board, so many of the people here are familiar with him, but may not have seen his post on HHMB. I don't see a problem with him posting the request...